Tuesday, March 28, 2017

!!!Maui And The Sun!!!


Maui and the sun
 It was a dark windy night.
  The sun had gone very deep down into the ground.
 Maui couldn’t see his food.
 “He goes far too fast” yelled Maui
Then Maui called his brothers.
 They came out of the dark.
 “ That sun goes to fast,”said Maui.
 “He gets up and zooms across the sky.
     Then he goes down.
 The nights are too long and the days are too short.
“We don’t get time to hunt or time to fish” shouted Maui and his five brothers.
Maui decided to pull the sun up because it goes too fast.
So they hid behind a huge rock and Maui said”On three grab the  sun” but the brothers said”What will we grab the sun with?” Maui said”With flax”. The brothers laughed.Then Maui got angry he said”Just do it!he grumbled.So they just did it .Maui yelled”one...two...three grab the sun” They pulled and pulled and pulled and Maui kept on beating the sun up and the sun said”Stop stop stop I’m getting hurt”.Maui said”Go slow we want to eat our food”. So the sun got very tired and he started getting slower and Maui was proud and he said thank you and they had lots of time to fish,hunt and eat their food.The sun moved very slow across the  air and sky and he went down like the other suns do.

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  1. I LOVE YOUR MAUI AND THE SUN

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  2. I Like your story disha you have a lot of capital letters and full stops

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