The Witch's Spell

  Once upon a time a family lived in a normal life but poor. But not for long, a witch was living by.

 The family was poor and lived near a swamp so they went to find help since they were poor. They accidentally asked the witch and they didn’t know.

  They thought the witch was nice but then something happened the witch put a curse on them the curse was to have bad luck all your life and she disappeared in the dark with an evil laugh “MWAHAHAHAHAHA”laughed the witch”. She also said “you’ll never catch me”.

So they continued their their life and the witch put them in a castle and when they woke up they were surprised and they didn’t remember anything about the witch's spell and they had bad luck they tripped over,put their face in the cake and all kinds of stuff happened.

The family had lots of bad luck but unless someone kills the witch and the curse will be broken.  a few days later a brave knight went to the witch house and killed her but she had potions there was a  heal potion and a poisonous potion but she didn’t see wich one so she picked up the poison potion and threw it on herself and she died with an evil laughter and he broke the spell and the curse was broken and the family now had a normal life but their castle disappeared and they went to find another home.

My recount writing

Title -Waterworld

Hook in sentence -” Welcome to Waterworld this is an amazing place that you can come to at any time” said the swimming instructor.

Beginning-  Introduction- The 5 W’s - When, What, Why,Where, Who

Last week our class was very excited and you might ask why because we are going to the amazing Flaxmere Water-world. We went in Term 2 Week 1  because we go there to learn swimming these days.So they finally reached Water-world but they came in a bus, they swam there and they had heaps of fun at Waterworld.They came with Heretāunga rāo rāo hāumako.

Middle -  First Paragraph - Uses your senses - smell, touch, feel,hear,see to explain what happened at the pool

Use alliteration, similes, onomatopoeia

They smelt the water that was fresh as rain and the students felt the warm, warm water.  The children heard the bubbles bubbling in the water and they saw blueeee clear fresh water.

Middle -   Second paragraph - Use some dialogue - speech marks to write about what some people said.

“So let's get started” said the swim instructor that was teaching us. So we started off with freestyle and we had to do a full length of the pool.   The pool has numbers and they are 1 is the deep one 2 is a little bit shallow and third is kinda shallow and 5 is just shallow and 6 is very shallow and there is a little pool but is doesn’t have a number.     Then we did some dolphin dives for a few times and we did something with the swimming board but I can’t remember what it was called.   The leader said”You didn’t listen at all so we are doing it again!”Then we did what they asked and this time she said”You guys did heaps better than the other time”.

Middle -   Third paragraph - Write about your favorite part and why it was your favourite.

My favourite part was the dolphin dives because you get to do it for a long long time. I just love, love love doing them and I do them because we get to go right to the bottom and come back up just like you are a real dolphin and people can see you.

End -   Conclusion - Finish your story up - with a comment about how you feel about swimming or what you will be working on next time you go.

I feel so warm and comfortable. I need to work on freestyle and backstroke. It  was the best day ever.

Easter (YAY) yummy

Easter has a lot of easter eggs that are chocolate that you can eat.If you have been very naughty these days you won’t get any surprise eggs and the easter bunny will only give you one.The easter bunny only gives special surprises to kids that have been good these days.The easter bunny leaves a easter bunny that has m&m’s in it so they know that he’s been there and he gave it to them.They know that they’ve been good.Sometimes they get ninja turtle eggs and minion eggs as well.If they help their parents they’ll get some of them.At last they get to hunt for them and bring them inside and the Favorite part is the eating time!!!(Yay)












                  

!!!Maui And The Sun!!!

Maui and the sun

 It was a dark windy night.

  The sun had gone very deep down into the ground.

 Maui couldn’t see his food.

 “He goes far too fast” yelled Maui

Then Maui called his brothers.

 They came out of the dark.

 “ That sun goes to fast,”said Maui.

 “He gets up and zooms across the sky.

     Then he goes down.

 The nights are too long and the days are too short.

“We don’t get time to hunt or time to fish” shouted Maui and his five brothers.

Maui decided to pull the sun up because it goes too fast.
So they hid behind a huge rock and Maui said”On three grab the  sun” but the brothers said”What will we grab the sun with?” Maui said”With flax”. The brothers laughed.Then Maui got angry he said”Just do it!he grumbled.So they just did it .Maui yelled”one...two...three grab the sun” They pulled and pulled and pulled and Maui kept on beating the sun up and the sun said”Stop stop stop I’m getting hurt”.Maui said”Go slow we want to eat our food”. So the sun got very tired and he started getting slower and Maui was proud and he said thank you and they had lots of time to fish,hunt and eat their food.The sun moved very slow across the  air and sky and he went down like the other suns do.

Me and My best friend Ayla

  My  best friend Ayla and I were getting ready for camp so we started packing our stuff.

  Soon enough we got our stuff packed and we headed to camp .

My friend Ayla was so excited for camp she said” hurry up Disha we're getting late  for camp”

  So we continued walking .

  Then 15 minutes later we were there so  we started setting our stuff at camp Ayla had some trouble so I helped her soon it was night time so we got in our tent and we went to sleep,but a little while later Ayla heard something so she came in my tent and woke me up to see what it was.So we got out of the tent and we went to see what it was so we got closer and closer and closer until Ayla screamed aaaaaaaaaaa hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what will happen next to be continued...

Squirrels

Your story should have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.

• Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.
• Edit and check your story on your own , with a buddy and have it checked by a teacher before you blog.

 One day two little squirrels were playing hide and seek as soon as they saw a trail of stones they started to follow it.Soon the stones lead to a little forest that had kind and cute little animals , not like tigers and cheetahs but baby cheetahs are cute.

      So they went into the forest and saw all the animals and started making friends with them but one thing they did not tell them was, it was school for them .Then one kind animal told them that they had school. Then the little twin  squirrels said “ can we come to school as well “.And the animals said “ sure”  if I can ask my teacher  if she says yes you can come.

       So the next day they went to school and asked their teacher if the two little twin squirrels could join their  class and Mrs Roach was a animal teacher that teaches animals  how to be nice to other animals.She also teaches them how to welcome people to their school.And she said “Yes”.Then she said to the other animals we will have a welcome assembly tomorrow.The animals went yes very loudly but one animal did not like assemblies.She only loves food like mice or more mice.

  So it was home time so the two little squirrels were waiting for their mum to come so they decided to play while their mum is coming to pick them up.Soon their mum was here and picked them up and before they went  they yelled out byeeeeeeeeee.So they told their mum everything and they said “it was the best day ever.

  They enjoyed school so they went to school everyday  and the cat girl started bullying the  two little twins.It was really mean, she was not kind at all, she was mean and a greedy cat.So he told the teacher and the teacher said”Be nice to the new student Wriley so she learned something new. She started being nice and kind and learned it from the twins.They started being friends.

Story of your choice

My teacher is very nice and kind.My teacher has lots of stuff she even has a laptop that is silver and does not have any marks on it.My teacher has 25 students in her class.My teacher has a hard time to get sorted with some people.The teachers name is Mrs Roach.She loves drinking coffee sometimes I think.My teacher is trying to get people on the top of the ladder.The ladder means if you work really hard then you get your name written on the ladder.Mrs Roach she has lots of stuff.Mrs Roach has maths games and normal games and the maths games are only to be used for maths.The normal games are supposed to be used only on rainy days.My teacher is sometimes on duty she makes sure anybody doesn't get hurt on the playground.My teacher has to sometimes go to the office for a meeting.Sometimes we can have a BBQ at school for some information.My teacher has got a key for the Chromebooks and has a another key to lock the doors.When we go to play capture the flag and when we go swimming at the Frimley pools and our pool we lock the doors.Mrs Roach helps you learn.Mrs Roach has these little coupons that when you get a hundred dollars you get different stuff like to wear pjs to school or get a ice block or have lunch with the teacher or wear mufti to school or free time on the playground.Mrs Roach has lots of stuff to do today she has to read with students.Mrs Roach helps students on their chromebook to blog some neat and tidy writing.The teachers students  are Bison,Emilie,Lavini,Riley,Alya,Phoenix,Prapty,Troy,Jake,Beau,Andre,Conner,Fatihah,Mia,Integra,Disha,Sasha,Essence,Koia,Synclair,Chosen,Kingston,Kyra and Jaqob, that is some of her students.If you want to know more about them I will tell you these students get kind of noisy sometimes because they want to talk to their BBF.Mrs Roach has blond and black striped hair and she wears colourful clothes.